Review Detail of Mr_Moringstar in Second Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)
Review detail
For every book i read there is a 5 star rating so I was just giving myself a 5 star rating . Anyway I enjoy this manhwa and wanted to write a fanfic on this for quite some time now so I wrote this . now you guys can give me a honest reveiew on this and help me out to improve it . Any suggestions will be helpful . Support me to get more chapters in the future 😁😁
Second Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)
Mr_Moringstar
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what the fuck is this you said his memories got erase then why the fuck does he know he is another world why does act atleast like an adult why the fuck does he know about that this setting is like chinese and answer me you stupid fuck if his memories is got erase he should act around his age and not remember somethings if i were you just rewrite this while its still in early chapters just reincarnate him with his memories because pretty sure your going to use some other references and knowledges that only and earthling would know if you dont then this fanfic will have alot of plot holes which makes everyone question this shit
Etiger789:Please space out your chapters wirds into paragraphs, it's annoying and frustrating reading just one block of text.
which chapters have no space ?? because iIam using a phone and it looks good . please tell me which one have no space and i will try to change it 🥲🥲
Etiger789:Please space out your chapters wirds into paragraphs, it's annoying and frustrating reading just one block of text.
if it is about the 8th chapter then i did it . in my phone i see no other chapter like that . If you are still facing any problems comment it .
Etiger789:Please space out your chapters wirds into paragraphs, it's annoying and frustrating reading just one block of text.
when I was reading on the Internet the forth chapter and upwards were all buched together but it's fine now.
Mr_Moringstar:if it is about the 8th chapter then i did it . in my phone i see no other chapter like that . If you are still facing any problems comment it .
