Review Detail of UBI_Master in The Extra Wants To Live

Item: The Extra Wants To Live
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

UBI_MasterLv320dUBI_Master

The changing POV per paragraph in chapter 1 make me losing my concentration. Please use this review as a lesson for your growing in the future.

Ink_Weaver122

Liked it!

Ink_Weaver122AuthorInk_Weaver122

sure, and I will edit the first few chapters in a few hours and also I stopped changing the POV in later chapters

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UBI_MasterLv3UBI_Master

nice, i will delete this review after you do that. 👌👌👌

Ink_Weaver122:sure, and I will edit the first few chapters in a few hours and also I stopped changing the POV in later chapters

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Ink_Weaver122AuthorInk_Weaver122

I edited a few chapters, can you take this review off? and give me 5 stars one😁

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UBI_MasterLv3UBI_Master

sure man. 👍👍👍

Ink_Weaver122:I edited a few chapters, can you take this review off? and give me 5 stars one😁

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