Review Detail of Andrew_Vanderwall in John Wick: (Rewriting!)

Item: John Wick: (Rewriting!)
Rating: 5

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Andrew_VanderwallLv152mthAndrew_Vanderwall

i gave 5 simply for it being a Wick fic ive been looking for them recently pretty decent overall. I'd advise giving him some training soon or something because pwople wont want to stick around to long for a weak protag in that kind of world.

John Wick: (Rewriting!)

bythgr

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bythgrAuthorbythgr

Thank you for the support and I agree with you but let the story flow, in the next chapters he will have a training phase, probably , giving him a power up like you mentioned. I want to give him a good foundation instead of just powering him up and remove the struggle that exists in the John Wick world.

2mth

Andrew_VanderwallLv15Andrew_Vanderwall

i meant more along the lines of fire arms training and such at a beginner level but i understand what you mean to let it flow. as I'm not writing it and not sure of your vision for the story i can only make suggestions

2mth