Review Detail of Ryughaa in Gamer Superstar

I'm sorry if you have difficulty to read more than 3 chapters of novels a little more complicated, I hope you find a good and very simple one for your taste :) Ty for the review

Honestly I read your previous works they were good but honestly it was good till yih started adding multiple pov not that it's a bad thing but it should only be done when looking into another character past such as a extremly tragic past that is good to get to know the character usually done near end of story or mid part of it But it was bad till mutiple povs But the problem with it is that it gets extremly confusing on what’s happening I’m not trying to hate since it happens to everyone at some point but my honest advice when writing is to stick to one pov and convey what happens through what the mc dose and what happens to him example When reading a Reddit story of a guy explaining his life it’s in 1 pov that’s what draws people into the story even if they are fake I feel like I was harsh but keep going I can’t hate one someone that’s trying Have a good one

That's not a problem, it's normal not to like a certain style. Other readers have commented on the interviews getting in the way of the reading flow and I decided to change that to the different POVs when I wanted to express something about a character that wasn't possible through the MC's eyes. But I hope you find something to your liking :)