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Very good translation and novel, hope that you keep updating it ...........................................................................
You said that Primordials can use their powers in the mortal world, they just don't want so they will have to go back to the god world, but as he can, he should have the prestige of someone that can literally destroy the world of he wants, I'm I wrong? He just let a mortal king treats him as a poor guy but both them know that he could kill everyone if he wants, but both act like he couldn't
Can't keep reading... The Mc is just a Simp for Riviera. He lives million or bilions of years as a god and is still a Simp for a 2d anime girl that he saw on his past life? In one moment he is acting like he is the stronger being in the world, in the other moment he is an Otaku that can't stop think about an elf he saw in an anime millions of years ago lol. And not only this, but why the author made the MC so powerful and respected in the godly world, but it the human world he is just acting like a poor guy. Where is the proud he had? Bro have the power to destroy the world of he wants, he acted like that in the godly world, but in the mortal world he just ignore that and became a poor guy that has to be humble to a king that hate him? This is definetly not a novel for me
I can see a lot of AI in the writing to fill the world count, but not at the point that I can't read. Because of that, the peace is very slow, I recommend wait it have 20+ chapters so yo will have something substantial to read, forbnow it was just 5 chapters of the Mc transmigrating and knowing here he is...
Okay, I read up to chapter 61 and I have some important points about the story. What attracted me was that the author finally just wanted the MC to be an Actor, instead of focusing his career on the generic music or film director career that all fanfics with this theme have. But what's repelling me from the story is the overuse of AI for writing. An MC's thought that should last 20 words, the AI turns into 500 words just by repeating the same thing several times, or exaggeratedly refining the text to appear much more cultured and erudite. A Shakespeare-level reflection of thousands of words just for a secondary character who appears for 15 minutes in Modern Family... really? It seems like the author just wants to fill the chapter's word count by adding as many useless AI words as possible to make it seem like he's someone intelligent.
I was excited for it, but the Mc is just a Saitama with the plot knowledge and a system, he just watch TV all day and act like he doesn't care about anything. The worst for me is that he just forget about his system all the time. Every character that he copy he could get 1% stronger, but for some reason, in 13 chapters he had just copied 3 characters, besides meeting more than 10 that he could have copied... Idk, if the author doesn't want to make the Mc op, at least make a time limitation for the system and don't just ignore characters that the Mc can copy
Okay, that's a really well written story, but that's not a story for me, read about an MC so weak and useless isn't my cup of tea, 20 chapters and the Mc hasn't changed anything in the cannon besides some small "butterfly effects", an mc that have trained for 20 chapters and still got used as a baseball bat for radditz isn't an mc that I wanna keep following. I know that you wanna make some development, and I really like to read some weak to strong, but when the Mc is just weak and you plan make him strong in 200 chapters, that's not a pacing for me.
This fic is doing good, but only at the original side, as the real Shameless Plot, I'm getting tired of just read the cannon without changing everything... Idk, we have 2 shameless fanfics at the same time and both hasn't changed anything yet in the Canon...
Waiting for when the fanfic gets a MC, for now I just saw an NPC that watches what happen in the original episode like us and do nothing. I know that you don't want a Mary sue and all of that, but people read a fanfic for the Main Character, and I don't saw the Main Character yet