Review Detail of Hayden_W4lker in In Fallout New Vegas with a b****'n arsenal, but I'm not the courier?
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im not a good reviewer and just a normal reader but as a fallout fan myself this novel just a new breath for me, 2 year in this app i dont see much a good fallout fanfic, a lot of em just a self insert or a low effort because they doesnt know fallout much, but i see this novel have potential to be a good one, i must say its has many flaw but you can improve it more and make the character more likeable, im hoping im saying this for you author have more motivation not a pressure you to write and having you a burnout or writer block, enjoy exploring the story , charcater , some wierd stuff that fallout world offer and to writing this fanfic, take it slow if you new at writing.
In Fallout New Vegas with a b****'n arsenal, but I'm not the courier?
JL_567
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Hayden_W4lker:dont have much experince for writing to my self but as a reader im hoping you know and understand the storyline of FNV, maybe add a twist and turn or something that make the reader want more and waiting for the next update, thats all from me, as i said in the last reviews, just write and have fun, you can improve it along the way, maybe add more guns and tactical gear for jake or rather make an army ? i dont know its your story and just cook some good stuff, just you know im still here to ready your stuffimage
All good no bad feelings taken! I appreciate the kind words. Honestly this is mostly a hobby piece and even my best writings aren't great in the beginning. I understand what you mean, a lot of fics no matter the source material are very webnovely if that makes sense. I can't promise consistency on updates but I'm trying something new here and wanted to get back into writing. I am more than open to suggestions or criticism if you have any
dont have much experince for writing to my self but as a reader im hoping you know and understand the storyline of FNV, maybe add a twist and turn or something that make the reader want more and waiting for the next update, thats all from me, as i said in the last reviews, just write and have fun, you can improve it along the way, maybe add more guns and tactical gear for jake or rather make an army ? i dont know its your story and just cook some good stuff, just you know im still here to ready your stuff
JL_567:All good no bad feelings taken! I appreciate the kind words. Honestly this is mostly a hobby piece and even my best writings aren't great in the beginning. I understand what you mean, a lot of fics no matter the source material are very webnovely if that makes sense. I can't promise consistency on updates but I'm trying something new here and wanted to get back into writing. I am more than open to suggestions or criticism if you have any