Review Detail of Reimoss in ADVENTURE OF A YOUNG UCHIHA
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Starlessii:In fact, I didn't understand exactly what you meant. As for McT's personality, it will be almost indifferent and somewhat mathematical if killing someone benefits him, he will kill him, if he doesn't get any benefit, ignore him.
Starlessii:If the content is bad you have the right to talk but if it is good there is no problem tell me what is your opinion about the story and if there is a mistake I will correct it
Reimoss:My friend... your novel is harder to read than mtl chinese novels. Most of it makes no sense.
Starlessii:Well, maybe I'll leave the novel because I'm not good at English and there's no solution.
Starlessii:I have completely modified the first chapter, has it become better and how much do you rate English words out of 10
You can follow the story and if you stay in it and complete it I promise you something different from the rest of the novels the idea is in my head now
Reimoss:It makes more sense now and I'd give it a 7+
Try to use grammarly or a grammar checker just search it up and it can fix some of your mistakes. But check it after to make sure it does not make your sentences hard to understand
Starlessii:You can follow the story and if you stay in it and complete it I promise you something different from the rest of the novels the idea is in my head now
morally ambiguous, emotionless, quiet MCs are boring and dull. Antiheroes are heroes so being able to write cruel is interesting but im betting to guess you wrongly thought antihero was some MC who is half villian and morally questionable. which doesn't make sense. you learned english words on this app, never thought to check their meaning first, stupid move. and thanks for describing what a loser he is in the synopsis so I can pass on having to give it a chance myself! Grab a dictionary next time you decide to write!
Starlessii:If the content is bad you have the right to talk but if it is good there is no problem tell me what is your opinion about the story and if there is a mistake I will correct it
In fact, I didn't understand exactly what you meant. As for McT's personality, it will be almost indifferent and somewhat mathematical if killing someone benefits him, he will kill him, if he doesn't get any benefit, ignore him.
DetachedDreamer:morally ambiguous, emotionless, quiet MCs are boring and dull. Antiheroes are heroes so being able to write cruel is interesting but im betting to guess you wrongly thought antihero was some MC who is half villian and morally questionable. which doesn't make sense. you learned english words on this app, never thought to check their meaning first, stupid move. and thanks for describing what a loser he is in the synopsis so I can pass on having to give it a chance myself! Grab a dictionary next time you decide to write!
I don't know, maybe it makes it worse. I recently tried to edit some words in chapters. You can check the last two chapters if there was something wrong with them.
Wvttz:Try to use grammarly or a grammar checker just search it up and it can fix some of your mistakes. But check it after to make sure it does not make your sentences hard to understand
And the character of mc I probably can't fully show it in a world like douluo, so I have other plans as the plot progresses.
DetachedDreamer:morally ambiguous, emotionless, quiet MCs are boring and dull. Antiheroes are heroes so being able to write cruel is interesting but im betting to guess you wrongly thought antihero was some MC who is half villian and morally questionable. which doesn't make sense. you learned english words on this app, never thought to check their meaning first, stupid move. and thanks for describing what a loser he is in the synopsis so I can pass on having to give it a chance myself! Grab a dictionary next time you decide to write!
Mmm mc here is from the world of Naruto where wars and assassination are common so the principles and morals are different from us But it's not like I'm making him kill people left and right.
DetachedDreamer:antiheroes don't kill folk for benefits.