Review Detail of Daoist890597 in Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System
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I regret that I cannot give a higher score to encourage the writer, but the plot is too unoriginal and predictable. The main character is portrayed as an opportunistic sociopath with a gamer system, and the story revolves around collecting girls in a way reminiscent of catching Pokémon. Essentially, it's just another self-fulfilling fanfic.
Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System
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@heavenlydawn_ To be fair, @Daoist890597 is pretty much correct about the flaws they are pointing out, and your fic's lack of originality isn't helping either.
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Actually the fanfic is fine. It doesn't have the most original premise, but it's not like fanfics with these premises are very good either. Compared to many others this one, from the little I have seen, can be considered good. The protagonist has a clear goal and things didn't go from 0 to 100 very quickly. There are no decisions made just because without being explored... No sense. And I don't see, on the surface, any flaws in the narrative or some crazy and incredibly unrealistic or stupid decision.
Tinman:@heavenlydawn_ To be fair, @Daoist890597 is pretty much correct about the flaws they are pointing out, and your fic's lack of originality isn't helping either.