Normally, I would try to give the author a better score for encouragement, but it is impossible for me to give any decent scores except in the updating stability part. The grammar is the worst that I can barely guess the meaning of the sentences, and the plot is shallow, inconsistent, but somehow managed to be predictable and forced. The characters are completely OOC, with Rias and Issei being the worst examples. Rias is not that insane, and Issei would never stoop low enough to kill Akeno just to please Rias, nor would he challenge someone he doesn't know like Vegeta and get killed out of nowhere. He isn't a battle maniac and he wouldn't do something so dumb, especially after Ddraig's warning. There is simply no logical reason for him to behave like this. These two are not Rias and Issei, but rather completely unrecognizable characters using their name.

You have writing skills, but unfortunately, the plot, characters, and main character are overused. We already have stories about evil bastards with no morals ruining the plot every single day. Instead of making the story new and unpredictable, the main character's actions only make the story more predictable. At the end of the day, the villains win and the heroes get ruined, and that's it.

please tell me you aren't planning to beat Issei and steal his boosted gear in the next chapter. I've already seen enough authors who pull this stunt more than enough already

@heavenlydawn_ To be fair, @Daoist890597 is pretty much correct about the flaws they are pointing out, and your fic's lack of originality isn't helping either.

I wish Kurumi conquer instead of killing them Issei Hyoduo, Shido Itsuka, and Sung Jin Mi (Sung Jin-woo). Because none of them deserve to die, in light novel Issei has new dream involved world peace and Shido is just a victim of circumstances while Sung Jin-woo... Ironically enough he is the most less heroic of them all and more like anti hero but he still save the world from CERTAIN destruction, but hey, if she got new protagonist targets who deserve to die like Keyaru, i wouldn't mind see the dude get torture and killed

I hope when Issei get mentioned, it won't involve him getting Ntred again........................................................................................................................................................................................................

Issei maybe pervert and yelling about harem a lot, but he never tried, want or even thinking to add anyone in his harem even once.........................................................................................................

Might as well give Issei some power up and some successful counter attack against Riser and taking things or heroine back to making story becomes more exciting and making the story less predictable than the current plot.

Might as well give Issei some power up and some successful counter attack against Riser and taking things or heroine back to making story becomes more exciting and making the story less predictable than the current plot.

I am just hoping that this will not be another Issei bashing story, i have seen those types of stories too many times enough to make developing sickness for Issei bashing fanfics

This is the first time that someone actually know that being in Issei's shoe is dangerous instead of ditching and insulting him for just born with having boosted gear while being hypocritically claiming that he doesn't deserve it, while they themselves reincarnated with super op cheats code and power that making boosted gear look like a joke.

You mean "there are nothing like that and you aren't interest in Ntr, bashing, boosted gear stealing" am i right?

I just hope she just going to reprimand and reforms Issei unlike all other fanfics which just beating him up, huliminate and torture him.

I hope Issei atleast becoming someone interesting here, but i hope he won't become a villain though, atleast not shallow evil one, but become interesting and likable one.

Author have you read Dxd light novel yet? Dxd anime isn't the source for on Issei characters or any characters in the series actually, Dxd anime suck so much that it destroy every characters and its season 3 consider as fanon by a lot of people and force me to read light novel instead because atleast in light novel Issei is characters is likeable.

*Bemoaning voice* Dxd fic along with unlucky protagonist who about to being cuck is Issei again?! Don't you have any other anime or victim to at?! How many times you gonna recycle and repeat this plot over and over again?! Do something new!!!

I just hope that you won't Ntr and downgraded Issei again in your new fic

If that is the case then shouldn't you make Issei less incompetent and less one dimension here and maybe as Riser said have a life of his own and find other girl? I will be honest here, this Issei is bad characters and super generic as fuck!!! Seriously i want to see novel where antagonist(Issei) has some personality!!!!

Is it only me who notice that everyone around the world seem to know Sirzechs tragic love life?

You mean both of them doesn't get Ntr like Sirzechs right? Well, actually the fact that i bought about Ntr up because i thought Issei likely to suffer next because of this [Grayfia L., OC, Rias G., H. Akeno] on fanfics and he always gets bashing a lot in fanfics to a ridiculous degree especially in webnovel, while i brought Saji up because sona is popular in fanfic, sorry if this repeat question annoy you.