interesting story. While I was reading, I felt like I had entered the world of the "Halo" series. Good start, although quite complicated. I hope that in the next chapter or in other chapters, you will add an unexpected scene, or a scene that can make readers curious. Sometimes, sci-fi has the impression of a quite complicated mystery. Depends on the writing.
Hesreth
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