Review Detail of Pilotfranco in Avatar The Legend of Korra: Ruthless Wind

Ya no the mc is bad, the dialogue is immature. The backstory for the mc is shit. like show no tell but the author tells everytime like when mc went murderous the author added a line that said oh he must have had something bad happen to him in the past. Like wtf if you want some stupid backstory to add to the plot you develop it through actions not hinting from another characters dialogue. Overall this is a immature work that I wouldn’t recommend to actually literature enthusiast. If you’re here for trashy fanfic then go ahead you might enjoy it.