Review Detail of Arkella in Final System: Level Up or Die.

This is an excellent, well-crafted book. For me there are definitely some flaws, concerning writing quality and character design. The writing is not perfect, especially in later chapters-- with minuscule grammar flaws and such. With story development, and world background, it is on point. The idea of using a system has been repeated throughout this platform, but the author transforms the system and incorporates it into a game. The idea itself is intrinsically unique especially with the introduction of the elder tree and it's withering, which allows for the creation of a strong premise. However, there are still components that are unclear-- the final question. How do you win? There are rankings, there is a first place spot, but in the end, how is the inheritors of the final system determined. With character design, the main character and Kai are the only two characters. There is definitely some degree of emotion and empathy towards these characters, but I'd regard them as lacking a bit of depth. The characters (Zero primarily) are marketed as tricky and strategic, but display a lack of emotion concerning anger, fear, or frustration. There should be a small addition to the character's internal feeling, without writing, "that I am happy.. I am frustrated." Overall, this is a great novel, and I strongly encourage the author to continue writing.