Review Detail of kosmas_kosmas in Naruto: God'S Misfortune (DXD)

Item: Naruto: God'S Misfortune (DXD)
Rating: 3.4

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kosmas_kosmasLv43mthkosmas_kosmas

intresting plot but the grammar is quite bad many times i strugled to figure out what was written.As for the MC it shares nothing with naruto other than the name neither in looks or character so it is not a crossover

Naruto: God'S Misfortune (DXD)

Mart_Ero

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Mart_EroAuthorMart_Ero

It is fixed

kosmas_kosmas:''This is a fic from the perspective of a real Angel, not what everyone expects from one. will begin in The World of DxD as Naruto being The first Angel to be created and Lucifer The second, The Name''. Thats your wholle description, maybe it got cut off since it ends abruptly?

3mth

Mart_EroAuthorMart_Ero

Im pretty bad at English, so I can't do much. But I already mentioned in the description that he only has the name Naruto. He's a complete OC with a well-known name

3mth

kosmas_kosmasLv4kosmas_kosmas

''This is a fic from the perspective of a real Angel, not what everyone expects from one. will begin in The World of DxD as Naruto being The first Angel to be created and Lucifer The second, The Name''. Thats your wholle description, maybe it got cut off since it ends abruptly?

Mart_Ero:Im pretty bad at English, so I can't do much. But I already mentioned in the description that he only has the name Naruto. He's a complete OC with a well-known name

3mth