Well, well, I suggest you write less in the first person, I can't find the words to explain the reason, but it has to do with the experience while we read. The chapter was good.

I will be here throughout the entire process expectantly, looking forward to each new chapter.

That pleases me. Sounds like something I would read even if it had 10k chapters.

I'm having a good development from the beginning, the protagonist is not too idiotic and the plot simply does not make everyone look like idiots. At the moment we are on chapter 22 if I remember correctly and I hope that the personality of the protagonist advances with his ambitions and becomes someone Dominant like a tyrant. Let him only defend interests, since he comes from below and only his fat partner helps him as a roommate. Help him contribute in the future to repay that favor.

I want to know. Will the protagonist be a person with a Dominant attitude?It would be great if his personality was changed as time went by. Turning him into a guy like a dominant emperor who dictates the laws and they are followed no matter what.

Just a loser reincarnating into another "villain." Where is the entertainment here because I can't find it 😑

Man. You are denigrating a great person, how can you do that 😑

I don't have enough patience to continue reading this.

They were totally unknown 😶. He literally he could have lost his life and... You know what, screw it. I will not continue looking for explanations for a scene that could have been done better

He basically lost everything to defend a girl he just met. What a delirium to be a hero.

This protagonist is stupid as hell 😑

Hello

MC with shit slave attitude. He made me nauseous while reading, author. Because it's better not to delete this crap and save yourself the hater they will throw at you for this shit you wrote. Damn. You fucking retarded shit who write the same thing as others. Same MC as his attitude of knowing the future and shit later he complicates things by adding unnecessary things. Like luck points, sky luck, child of destiny/heaven and all that crap that there is no difference between putting them in or not. All you ill-born sons of bitches, stop writing crap and better continue studying. Sons of bitches

This chapter contradicted itself in everything. How does the AI ​​have control over your brain but needs your permission to access your cell phone? Man, this episode is the most ridiculous thing I've seen this week. He contradicted himself in every dialogue of the conversation

I was thinking about why this story seemed familiar to me. And remember. I stopped reading it because the MC follows the same path as everyone's licking dog.

I will give my point of view so that you do not think that I have given my opinion for no reason. I find it boring because of the typical environment of which the MC is. Everyone is always poor who works like slaves and some impossible opportunities come to them for no reason. I mean, everyone who works as slaves has hate and darkness in them, a desire for revenge. So it is ridiculous that you put a variable (x) that appears and sends him to the past just because he supposedly wants revenge when everyone else wants the same thing. If you had put that in some kind of ending, when he is betrayed. Bring up this Variable and say. "You want power. You want revenge, destroy those who betrayed you. Come! Take my hand, and I will give you the power you desire." That would have been better. And in the end, this (Variable), He only did that to screw other entities

It's boring. The title promises something good, but the content does not meet expectations.

Continue reading and you will know everything. It's almost ending.

Maybe. This is only a translation with the permission of the author.

Yeah