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Review Detail of Mahenzz in Survival in Akame ga kill.

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Mahenzz
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Pretty good. Although the writing can be pretty spotty at times. Random use of semi-colons, sentences being cut off or unfinished, and a bad case of repitition. It seems like the author is trying to write more detail into the events or thoughts of the characters but the way it's written is very akward. The only way I can describe it is that he is describing the same thing over and over but with different details being emphasized.

Survival in Akame ga kill.

Corrigible_steel

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Corrigible_steel
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thanks for pointing out my mistakes, I still new in writing as this is my first fic, so I will try to improve in the points you have mentioned.