Pretty good. Although the writing can be pretty spotty at times. Random use of semi-colons, sentences being cut off or unfinished, and a bad case of repitition. It seems like the author is trying to write more detail into the events or thoughts of the characters but the way it's written is very akward. The only way I can describe it is that he is describing the same thing over and over but with different details being emphasized.
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