Review Detail of Arc_Dragon in Shinji Matou at Your Service
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The story is good.The writing is good and it is enjoyable if you leave your brain..The fic would have been more enjoyable if shinji was not too young.MThe story looked like a Chinese story where 9 Yr old become Planetary level.. This is ridiculous.A six-eight year old doesnot develope much no matter which era.What body developments are you talking about? Let Mc involve in fourth grail but not like this.It foesnot make sense even in fate world. I don't like it one bit ..The mC is too young for his actions
Shinji Matou at Your Service
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No he is too young the achieve the feats he is achieving in this story.No need to make Sakura suffer.You can make timeskip.Do fourth grail war differently.Train the kids upto fifth grail war then start something.You can have other arcs of character growths.An MC who suddenly becomes shinji will have to build his emotions and bonds.He cannot just go aha the Holly grail and pew pew ...
AbsoluteCode:I agree with you. Shinji can't use his little brother for mana transfer since he's just a child lol. On the other hand, Mc being a child Shinji means it prevent Sakura tragic life which is good.
Es una traducción, no creo que pueda lograr cambiar , por qué si lo hace, tendría que hacer el mismo los capitulos y ya no sería una traducción.
Arc_Dragon:No he is too young the achieve the feats he is achieving in this story.No need to make Sakura suffer.You can make timeskip.Do fourth grail war differently.Train the kids upto fifth grail war then start something.You can have other arcs of character growths.An MC who suddenly becomes shinji will have to build his emotions and bonds.He cannot just go aha the Holly grail and pew pew ...