Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Naruto: New Begining

All I ask for is 1% originality. its hard writing something original at this point, I get that, but just 1 percent. this is like .0000001 original. this story follows every other mediocre fanfic on here with the same core plot points. they aren't good, Idk why people think it is. the drama in this story is so horrendous and unnatural that you just gag, maybe laugh, might be confused. idk. Mom basically just says "well guys its about that time for me to die, seeya!" then she bounces and his friend snaps. I can't even believe this a thing. honestly I couldn't finish, im hoping its all an illusion and he wakes up from this terribly constructed dream. and I say if you aren't going to change an event then shut the f*ck up about it, say its inevitable and move on. or change it, maybe there's consequences but crying about it then not being able to do a thing? thats just bad writing. the worst. another mediocre story and another failure. on to the next one.