Review Detail of Raptor2244 in Jujutsu Kaisen: I have Rinne-Sharingan

The fic is pretty funny, and I always liked an OP mc. I have a lot of trouble telling who is doing the talking because sometimes there are large stretches of dialogue without any indication of who is speaking. MC wants a harem of beauties but is going about it in a kind of pathetic way. Considering he’s a child you can’t ask for much but forcing a woman who sees you as her brother to stay with you by using your authority is a little pitiful. I’m sure it’ll get better once he’s not a child but for now he has to act like a young master to get Shoko. He’s a little torture happy but I’m sure MC will learn to get what he wants without going nuclear every time anybody doesn’t obey him immediately. He needs more charisma and vision. Needs a goal besides chasing tail.