Review Detail of carnage212356 in Fate/Ultimate Antagonist

Item: Fate/Ultimate Antagonist
Rating: 4.4

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Binged it all in a day and have no regrets. The writing and grammar are fantastic with no mistakes and flows with no issue. I've really enjoyed the character you've developed so far, especially in the latest chapter (18) with the interaction between the two dragons. Looking forward to more in the future

Fate/Ultimate Antagonist

XElenea

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JustHavinFunReadinLv4JustHavinFunReadin

Like, it could be worse, but the grammar is by no means perfect, and the flow is generally pretty bad. It's very good for a TL, but it's not actually good.

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carnage212356Lv4carnage212356

well then we have differing opinions then. I will admit that the grammar has had recent issues but I more meant the flow of words and sentences. Not the general storyline, which I enjoy anyways.

JustHavinFunReadin:Like, it could be worse, but the grammar is by no means perfect, and the flow is generally pretty bad. It's very good for a TL, but it's not actually good.

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JustHavinFunReadinLv4JustHavinFunReadin

The flow got better, I think. I wouldn't have written this comment now.

JustHavinFunReadin:Like, it could be worse, but the grammar is by no means perfect, and the flow is generally pretty bad. It's very good for a TL, but it's not actually good.

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