Review Detail of Dzazmie_D_Fountain in Nemesis.

The book is good! Honestly, it is! You have a knack for descriptions and all. Also, you put the characters where they should be at the right time. Also, your world building skills are topnotch. But, I think you can do better when it comes to dialogues and description. For instance, describing a character from another's point of view. As for the dialogue, just lessen the dialogue tags and use more action words. Overall, I like the book! From the first chapter, to the fourth, where I stopped (for now!). Kudos, Author!