Dzazmie_D_Fountain
I am the fountain; I never run dry... I am the water; I never drown... Bibliophile 📖 Lectiophile ... Writing is my addiction...
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Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthCommentedwhy not go for, "My boss's handsome some, who might be earning a hundred times more than I do?'
"Well, sir, yes, but I don't remember my contract stating that I should train my cute boss son, who will definitely be earning times 100 of my salary if not one million," I said.- Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthCommented
the second part should really not be here... it would be better if it was a paragraph on its own, and then a 'note:' before it
Hi guys, I am Anna from Chicago. I know you have seen my name, but there is nothing bad in letting you know again, right? Before I continue, please add to your collection, send me the power stone, as this is one of my entries for WSA 2024, and finally, don't forget to share the story with others. So let's begin. - Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthCommented
Boy? Man sounds more... like it 🤭
I was running on the corridor trying to find my way to my billionaire boss's office, a very overbearing business tycoon, when I hit my head on a hard surface. I thought I hit my head on a wall, but oh no, a very hot boy was staring at me. He is literally a Greek god with the body and the face sculpted with perfection with the perfect brown eyes. - Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthPosted
The book is good! Honestly, it is! You have a knack for descriptions and all. Also, you put the characters where they should be at the right time. Also, your world building skills are topnotch. But, I think you can do better when it comes to dialogues and description. For instance, describing a character from another's point of view. As for the dialogue, just lessen the dialogue tags and use more action words. Overall, I like the book! From the first chapter, to the fourth, where I stopped (for now!). Kudos, Author!
- Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthCommentedCh 1 WHY DON'T WE GET MARRIED?
- Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthCommentedCh 1 WHY DON'T WE GET MARRIED?
- Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthCommentedCh 1 WHY DON'T WE GET MARRIED?
- Dzazmie_D_Fountain2mthCommentedCh 1 WHY DON'T WE GET MARRIED?
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- Dzazmie_D_Fountain3mthReplied to Fina_Rank1
🥺I'm so sorry!
PS: I just found out that this chapter exists already. I'll see what my editor can do for us. - Dzazmie_D_Fountain4mthCommented
Hey guys, Author here!I do hope that by the end of this chapter, you've dropped your comments and reviews.you have, right?thank you! 💕 and if you haven't already please 🙏🥺 do.
This book has been deleted. - Dzazmie_D_Fountain4mthPosted
...Just an reminder that when you see this, do well to give my book a read and don't forget to tell me what you think.Xìèxìe 😊
This book has been deleted. - Dzazmie_D_Fountain4mthReplied to udireaderCh 11 MARRY ME, MISS SCOTT
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- Dzazmie_D_Fountain6mthReplied to NatMarie
thank you 😊... will sort it out now
She was like a gust of wind, blowing over him on a very sunny day. He did not need to hide his most vulnerable side, not because he thrusted her, but because somewhere in him, he knew he had always known her. - Dzazmie_D_Fountain6mthReplied to Hannan_AdolfoCh 151 A LOVE THAT WOULD LAST FOR ETERNITY