Review Detail of Jeronimo in I Can Copy And Evolve Talents

It has a decent start. A glaring problem that gets more and more apparent is repetitive sentences and an incredibly generous use of adjectives. Characters aren't really fleshed out - it doesn't feel like I'm riding alongside MC on his journey (I can't get absorbed into the writing/story). While the power levels have been mapped out, the levels that we have been in contact with up to where I have read have not really been given a proper frame of reference. It's hard to get the feeling for how powerful someone or something really is. It indeed has potential, but reading it can be very jarring for me and it's hard to really sink myself into the story.