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Review Detail of Garland in Danmachi: Captured by Freya at the Beginning!

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Garland
GarlandLv43mthGarland

Yeah, it was pretty much evident that this was a Chinese Translated Story. They always have interesting concepts but overall execution leaves much to be desired. Sure being targeted by Freya isn't anything new but it was with how immediate Freya acted. I also felt like it was just a sudden start with him being already an adventurer and the lack of a good start and explanation. Things are also moving kinda fast with how easy it was for Freya to say that he is from another world, i mean sure his situation is strange but saying that he is from another world and being correct kinda feels like reading a script instead of a situation that is believable. Overall good ideas but bad execution. Some ideas are also kinda eh with just how integrated they are.

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Danmachi: Captured by Freya at the Beginning!

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Goksumr
GoksumrLv1Goksumr

Well, technically another world shouldn't seem that strange to them, I guess. Didn't they also descend from their own world to the human world?

Garland
GarlandLv4Garland

Yeah but Heaven wouldn't be called another world as it is still part of the Danmachi Universe. It wasn't the fact that she concluded that he was from another world but just how quickly she had guessed that he was from another. Their could have been many theories and suggestions on why he is like that but immediately she says that he is from another world. She already knew the answer.

Goksumr:Well, technically another world shouldn't seem that strange to them, I guess. Didn't they also descend from their own world to the human world?
SugmaMaleGamer
SugmaMaleGamerLv4SugmaMaleGamer

Maybe because of how different his soul is from mortals in the Danmachi World. Like seeing souls of mortals is one Freya's powers isn't it?

Kazuki_Ohira
Kazuki_OhiraLv3Kazuki_Ohira

I'm pretty sure Danmachi Gods can detect truths and lies, so maybe she just asked him?

Whadyamean
WhadyameanLv4Whadyamean

How would she know that a different looking soul is from another world? It could literally be anything not normal such as, some weird child of mystical creatures like dragons etc, their soul may have been effected by their traits, cursed and or being effected by magic in a weird way. I could see it as a plausible explanation, but it’s also just bad writing. It’s like having the MC escape from a prison and have them steal clothes from the locals only to be caught as an escapee because they have a different accent. Yes they’re different and it makes sense, but is so extreme it’s extremely off putting. There wasn’t even a need to out them as a transmitigator she could’ve just taken them because their soul was different like Bell. Makes much more sense and Freya couldn’t tell Bell was the son of Zeus only that his soul was different.

SugmaMaleGamer:Maybe because of how different his soul is from mortals in the Danmachi World. Like seeing souls of mortals is one Freya's powers isn't it?
SugmaMaleGamer
SugmaMaleGamerLv4SugmaMaleGamer

It's like scientists finding a new element that isn't in the periodic table and that it shouldn't be possible to have existed in earth so it's an alien element like the soul properties of a transmigrant person. Gods should have the knowledge of the possibility of higher beings and other dimensions oustide of their own through their connection to the laws of their own world, especially gods of wisdom or primordials. Souls that have come from a different dimension exist outside of the natural laws of their world so they are bound to be different from normal mortal souls which should be extremely noticeable for being that are very familiar with souls like Freya. Also Bell is adopted and not an actual blood relative of Zeus plus in Danmachi world demigods doesn't exist because gods and humans cannot procreate. That's why they have familias in the first place as humans in their familias could be like the child that they never had.

Whadyamean:How would she know that a different looking soul is from another world? It could literally be anything not normal such as, some weird child of mystical creatures like dragons etc, their soul may have been effected by their traits, cursed and or being effected by magic in a weird way. I could see it as a plausible explanation, but it’s also just bad writing. It’s like having the MC escape from a prison and have them steal clothes from the locals only to be caught as an escapee because they have a different accent. Yes they’re different and it makes sense, but is so extreme it’s extremely off putting. There wasn’t even a need to out them as a transmitigator she could’ve just taken them because their soul was different like Bell. Makes much more sense and Freya couldn’t tell Bell was the son of Zeus only that his soul was different.
Whadyamean
WhadyameanLv4Whadyamean

Fair enough, thabks for the explanation.

SugmaMaleGamer:It's like scientists finding a new element that isn't in the periodic table and that it shouldn't be possible to have existed in earth so it's an alien element like the soul properties of a transmigrant person. Gods should have the knowledge of the possibility of higher beings and other dimensions oustide of their own through their connection to the laws of their own world, especially gods of wisdom or primordials. Souls that have come from a different dimension exist outside of the natural laws of their world so they are bound to be different from normal mortal souls which should be extremely noticeable for being that are very familiar with souls like Freya. Also Bell is adopted and not an actual blood relative of Zeus plus in Danmachi world demigods doesn't exist because gods and humans cannot procreate. That's why they have familias in the first place as humans in their familias could be like the child that they never had.
Michi_Dodo
Michi_DodoLv13Michi_Dodo

dude the danmachi gods aren't that high level the story is focused more on their daily life so stop giving them high dimensional explainations and freya would identify transmigration are you alright in your head to know he is a otherworlder would need prior knowledge of other world i don't think danmachi gods even if oc can be that op and those guys are loosely connected to their myths dont'tuse the excuse of them being gods'sto make everthing possible gods in their series have lnwledge limited to their series.