Review Detail of Kamikaze_Eagle in Pokémon, I became Charmander

Item: Pokémon, I became Charmander
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

Kamikaze_EagleLv43mthKamikaze_Eagle

Overall a pokemon reincarnation fic with potential. I only have a few grips about it. First the part where the MC gains gold seems like a pointless and unnecessary addition. Second I just straight up don't like him gaining items like that escape rope through the system, and the infinite Oran berries irks me. Not to mention the suicidal Rattatas, they are a weak pokemon on the bottom of the food chain so why are they wantonly attacking a charmander like they are when they are ridiculously weak?

Pokémon, I became Charmander

Iruma_kun99

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Ahiru_ItazuraLv1Ahiru_Itazura

Author... did u forget that u have a story to write?

Peryite:Are rats always the smartest creatures? Thry attack humans who is like the 2-3 biggest predator in that world technically speaking probably lower but way higher than the rats

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PeryiteLv4Peryite

Are rats always the smartest creatures? Thry attack humans who is like the 2-3 biggest predator in that world technically speaking probably lower but way higher than the rats

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Kamikaze_EagleLv4Kamikaze_Eagle

Not an animal though, they're pokemon.

Peryite:Are rats always the smartest creatures? Thry attack humans who is like the 2-3 biggest predator in that world technically speaking probably lower but way higher than the rats

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PeryiteLv4Peryite

Yes but I was shortening the name I did not feel like attempting to spell the rats name I was referring tword the Pokémon the whole time

Kamikaze_Eagle:Not an animal though, they're pokemon.

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PeryiteLv4Peryite

I’m going to be honest I 100% did I would like to apologize

Ahiru_Itazura:Author... did u forget that u have a story to write?

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