Review Detail of therealet in Ldksks

To me, this story's grammar is wholly unreadable and extraordinarily difficult to make heads or tails of thus I have no choice but to drop this, which is unfortunate considering this is a fantastic idea you have here. For clarification I do not want this to be taken as an objective observation, perhaps for whoever may read this you'll see no issues in this story's grammar, however I feel it necessary to put this thought of mine out there. PS: To the author who will be feeling déjà vu reading this review, I deleted my other one and rewrote it here because I felt it was too matter-of-fact and treated your work very unfairly. I don't know if Webnovel allows you to edit already uploaded chapters, but if it does, if you allow me to do so, I would gladly help you edit and proofread these chapters, we'd just need to figure out a means of communication.