Terrible fanfiction. The author has never read or seen Naruto because the timeline of events is completely wrong.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Suryaputra_Karan
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LIKEJiraiya found Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan when the Second Great Ninja War was over. Obito is about 5 years younger than them so he shouldn't be a ninja right now.
Suryaputra_Karan:that rather an interesting point but Jiraya found the war orphans at 2nd Great Shinobi war so I have to made it like that
The timeline of your fanfiction is so messed up that I wouldn't be surprised if Gaara suddenly appears along with Konohamaru
Suryaputra_Karan:Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world.
Garra and konohamaru isn't even born yet lol and timeline is right as it should be. I don't see anything wrong.
Gabriel_4110:The timeline of your fanfiction is so messed up that I wouldn't be surprised if Gaara suddenly appears along with Konohamaru
I know they aren't born yet but since the timeline is messed up in your fanfiction then I wouldn't be surprised if they suddenly appear. At this time there should be the third great ninja war. The second great ninja war has been over for a while.
Suryaputra_Karan:Garra and konohamaru isn't even born yet lol and timeline is right as it should be. I don't see anything wrong.
that rather an interesting point but Jiraya found the war orphans at 2nd Great Shinobi war so I have to made it like that
Gabriel_4110:I know they aren't born yet but since the timeline is messed up in your fanfiction then I wouldn't be surprised if they suddenly appear. At this time there should be the third great ninja war. The second great ninja war has been over for a while.
Gabriel_4110:Jiraiya found Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan when the Second Great Ninja War was over. Obito is about 5 years younger than them so he shouldn't be a ninja right now.
I said about 5 years. The timeline is wrong because Rin, Obito and Kakashi should not be ninja at this time and the second great ninja war should be over.
Suryaputra_Karan:not 5 its 4 year younger. and yup that's how the story is progressing on ch 12 xD
that's why its'sa fanfic XD well 5 year it the age when they start acedamy hehe so by Sakumo connection I just skip the things...
Gabriel_4110:I said about 5 years. The timeline is wrong because Rin, Obito and Kakashi should not be ninja at this time and the second great ninja war should be over.
obito faked his death during the third shinobi war the end of these o d shinobi war was when tsunades little brother died jiraya picked up his students and orochimaru got a screw loose year 46 of konaha Nagato was born year 49 was when obito madara had to be the one to give nagato his eyes since he said he "awakened" then at 5 or 6 per the anime that's 9 years before obito meets madara when obito was 4 years old your timeline is way off he wouldn't have been able to get the rinnegan honestly this may be the biggest inconsistency in the show that they show madara with eyes at all when he supposedly already gave them to nagato
Suryaputra_Karan:Garra and konohamaru isn't even born yet lol and timeline is right as it should be. I don't see anything wrong.
Andrew_Alsbrooks:obito faked his death during the third shinobi war the end of these o d shinobi war was when tsunades little brother died jiraya picked up his students and orochimaru got a screw loose year 46 of konaha Nagato was born year 49 was when obito madara had to be the one to give nagato his eyes since he said he "awakened" then at 5 or 6 per the anime that's 9 years before obito meets madara when obito was 4 years old your timeline is way off he wouldn't have been able to get the rinnegan honestly this may be the biggest inconsistency in the show that they show madara with eyes at all when he supposedly already gave them to nagato
Oh, come on!! The original timeline is messed up in itself and here you're blaming others. What's wrong with you? Just enjoy and don't anger someone who is giving you free dopamine capsules.
Gabriel_4110:I said about 5 years. The timeline is wrong because Rin, Obito and Kakashi should not be ninja at this time and the second great ninja war should be over.