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Gabriel_4110
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Terrible fanfiction. The author has never read or seen Naruto because the timeline of events is completely wrong.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

Reincarnation as Obito Uchiha

Suryaputra_Karan

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Gabriel_4110
Gabriel_4110Lv1Gabriel_4110

Jiraiya found Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan when the Second Great Ninja War was over. Obito is about 5 years younger than them so he shouldn't be a ninja right now.

Suryaputra_Karan:that rather an interesting point but Jiraya found the war orphans at 2nd Great Shinobi war so I have to made it like that
Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthorSuryaputra_Karan

Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world.

Gabriel_4110
Gabriel_4110Lv1Gabriel_4110

The timeline of your fanfiction is so messed up that I wouldn't be surprised if Gaara suddenly appears along with Konohamaru

Suryaputra_Karan:Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world.
Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthorSuryaputra_Karan

Garra and konohamaru isn't even born yet lol and timeline is right as it should be. I don't see anything wrong.

Gabriel_4110:The timeline of your fanfiction is so messed up that I wouldn't be surprised if Gaara suddenly appears along with Konohamaru
Gabriel_4110
Gabriel_4110Lv1Gabriel_4110

I know they aren't born yet but since the timeline is messed up in your fanfiction then I wouldn't be surprised if they suddenly appear. At this time there should be the third great ninja war. The second great ninja war has been over for a while.

Suryaputra_Karan:Garra and konohamaru isn't even born yet lol and timeline is right as it should be. I don't see anything wrong.
Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthorSuryaputra_Karan

that rather an interesting point but Jiraya found the war orphans at 2nd Great Shinobi war so I have to made it like that

Gabriel_4110:I know they aren't born yet but since the timeline is messed up in your fanfiction then I wouldn't be surprised if they suddenly appear. At this time there should be the third great ninja war. The second great ninja war has been over for a while.
Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthorSuryaputra_Karan

not 5 its 4 year younger. and yup that's how the story is progressing on ch 12 xD

Gabriel_4110:Jiraiya found Yahiko, Nagato, and Konan when the Second Great Ninja War was over. Obito is about 5 years younger than them so he shouldn't be a ninja right now.
Gabriel_4110
Gabriel_4110Lv1Gabriel_4110

I said about 5 years. The timeline is wrong because Rin, Obito and Kakashi should not be ninja at this time and the second great ninja war should be over.

Suryaputra_Karan:not 5 its 4 year younger. and yup that's how the story is progressing on ch 12 xD
Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthorSuryaputra_Karan

that's why its'sa fanfic XD well 5 year it the age when they start acedamy hehe so by Sakumo connection I just skip the things...

Gabriel_4110:I said about 5 years. The timeline is wrong because Rin, Obito and Kakashi should not be ninja at this time and the second great ninja war should be over.
Andrew_Alsbrooks
Andrew_AlsbrooksLv14Andrew_Alsbrooks

obito faked his death during the third shinobi war the end of these o d shinobi war was when tsunades little brother died jiraya picked up his students and orochimaru got a screw loose year 46 of konaha Nagato was born year 49 was when obito madara had to be the one to give nagato his eyes since he said he "awakened" then at 5 or 6 per the anime that's 9 years before obito meets madara when obito was 4 years old your timeline is way off he wouldn't have been able to get the rinnegan honestly this may be the biggest inconsistency in the show that they show madara with eyes at all when he supposedly already gave them to nagato

Suryaputra_Karan:Garra and konohamaru isn't even born yet lol and timeline is right as it should be. I don't see anything wrong.
Suryaputra_Karan
Suryaputra_KaranAuthorSuryaputra_Karan

yeah i search for that in Google as well when I was writing that part.

Andrew_Alsbrooks:obito faked his death during the third shinobi war the end of these o d shinobi war was when tsunades little brother died jiraya picked up his students and orochimaru got a screw loose year 46 of konaha Nagato was born year 49 was when obito madara had to be the one to give nagato his eyes since he said he "awakened" then at 5 or 6 per the anime that's 9 years before obito meets madara when obito was 4 years old your timeline is way off he wouldn't have been able to get the rinnegan honestly this may be the biggest inconsistency in the show that they show madara with eyes at all when he supposedly already gave them to nagato
Lord_Azathoth
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Oh, come on!! The original timeline is messed up in itself and here you're blaming others. What's wrong with you? Just enjoy and don't anger someone who is giving you free dopamine capsules.

Gabriel_4110:I said about 5 years. The timeline is wrong because Rin, Obito and Kakashi should not be ninja at this time and the second great ninja war should be over.