just to weird for me I'm not into mommy love it just got to cringe I'm sorry. I couldn't continue. it could've been good but without the mommy thing. this story has no bright future in it I believe .
LamenThief
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LIKEno it's just the mother one gets me to much man. I see a lot of potential in the story line itself but the adding of the mother was just kinda off putting man. I hope your story does well
LamenThief:not sure if you liked the rest of the story since it is not 100% about his mother. It's like dropping it because you don't like one harem member when there will be many others in the future
Lucien121:no it's just the mother one gets me to much man. I see a lot of potential in the story line itself but the adding of the mother was just kinda off putting man. I hope your story does well
LamenThief:I understand you... it's a shame losing a great reader, tho