Review Detail of BlueJeans in Agent M: The Rise of Miro

The novel is good but it need more improvement on its writing. Detailed description is good. But it could distract reader attention on more crucial scenes. In some of the chapter, I easily distracted because how detailed the description of some scenes. It makes me forget what's going on. I'm not quite to sure with the timeline. It makes me wonder if some scenes were fake and some scenes were actual reality.There's no problem with the story. But for me the reading experience is needed to improve. Like avoiding to used detailed description on every scenes and focused on scenes that needed to be describe with more detail.Overall I'll still recommend reader to give this a try.