This is a really good story so far. How the worlds are combined so far has been really interesting. The only real negative that I have is chapter length / pacing. Essentially, chapters, even though they are average length for the app, feel short. It might be because of the AI translation, idk, but sometimes chapters can feel stop, then start if you get me. In chapter 43, we are now about to reach Hogwarts. It's generally not a great sign for Harry Potter works. I find if not at Hogwarts by ch10, then there is an increasing chance of the work being cropped The story itself is good quality, and I am looking forward to it continuing. Have a good day.
MaliciousPrince
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