Review Detail of Darkstel in Jaune the Barbarian

To be honest, I'm surprised. When I started reading the story, based on the name of the story, the image of Jaune and the initial reaction to it, at first I thought that this was another shitty story that this site is rich in, but the author was able to surprise me. Yes, the characters have OOC behavior, yes there are plot deviations, yes in places it is rustic and silly, but if we consider the world of this story as a parallel universe, especially considering how Jaune performed at the beginning of his original story, this version of him eclipses him not only with its growth, this story is worthy of collection and recognition.