Review Detail of mercurystarship in Spider-Man 0X
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Okay, I gave it an honest shot, wasn't expecting too much. The writing seems a bit immature, just not my thing. P.S.: Author, my review isn't meant to troll you, just sharing my honest opinion. Feel free to remove it if you'd like.
Spider-Man 0X
Xcalibur_Xc
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Dude, I've read almost 20 chapters, and I gotta say, you've got some writing chops. When I say it's not mature, it's not about the quality of your writing but more about how the story feels a bit unfocused even after all those chapters. It needs some setup to really grab attention. If you work on that, I bet it could skyrocket in quality. Best of luck with your writing journey ahead!
Xcalibur_Xc:Everyone got their own tastes, I can respect that. Thanks. Atleast you didn't try to troll like most who leaves a ff and drops review just for fun.
