I'm completely disappointed, I expected an MC that would act and behave like a monster, a goblin, but no, it's more of a typical MC that reincarnates into a monster and behaves like a human, where we've seen a goblin wanting to save and he cares about his mother and even worse the MC doesn't kill humans and the captured women the MC protects them and frees them.....6 liberated women betrayed the MC and the MC continues to free them anyway, and from what I read comments the MC will be becoming a servant/slave for a demon lord, I thought it would be for some human.
Rqmk
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LIKEIt's not that - he goes completely against common sense. For both a human AND a monster... Neither one would do what he does. Nor would his mothers do what they do. It is contrary to what and who they are. It is basic Psychology...
Rqmk:He eventually starts to act like a monster, do you expect someone normal who just transmigrate into a fantasy world just start killing everyone, that would not make much sense. He will eventually start to act like a tru goblin give it some time.
Rqmk:He eventually starts to act like a monster, do you expect someone normal who just transmigrate into a fantasy world just start killing everyone, that would not make much sense. He will eventually start to act like a tru goblin give it some time.
don't make this about sense, if you cared about sense you wouldn't make him so stupid and naive, there is a difference between acting monstrous and being completely naive, humans have killed before to survive, heck, humans have killed more than any other species on earth, so why would he not do so especially if he needs to do it to survive, besides all of this is a moot point, it doesn't matter if a story makes complete sense, what matters is if the story is enjoyable, and no one is going to enjoy reading about a wimpy monster.
Rqmk:He eventually starts to act like a monster, do you expect someone normal who just transmigrate into a fantasy world just start killing everyone, that would not make much sense. He will eventually start to act like a tru goblin give it some time.
well thanks for your feedback, I have being trying to make the story better and I think the last few chapters I wrote are clear indication of that change, I hope you'll consider reading them and providing me feedback regarding them.
Sir_Squirrel:don't make this about sense, if you cared about sense you wouldn't make him so stupid and naive, there is a difference between acting monstrous and being completely naive, humans have killed before to survive, heck, humans have killed more than any other species on earth, so why would he not do so especially if he needs to do it to survive, besides all of this is a moot point, it doesn't matter if a story makes complete sense, what matters is if the story is enjoyable, and no one is going to enjoy reading about a wimpy monster.
Have not read yet but given how you take feedback I think I’ll give it a try. I enjoy an author who doesn’t go around deleting bad reviews but inquiring on why and how to improve. Props to you author dude, I haven’t read your book but keep up this attitude and you will certainly improve. Also you can’t please everyone, keep that in mind.
Rqmk:well thanks for your feedback, I have being trying to make the story better and I think the last few chapters I wrote are clear indication of that change, I hope you'll consider reading them and providing me feedback regarding them.
well, there's a similar novel like this one. however, MC who's a goblin ain't a reincarnator. Goblin God's predator simulation system. Though this novel ain't bad, at least better than those average WNm
iLoveSex:If you're like me who hates an MC who reincarnates into a monster and won't act like the reincarnated monster and will behave like a human, don't waste your time. I wish I had read the comments before so I wouldn't have wasted my time.
yeah i guess? like old people reincarnated into baby he will affect by baby physiology make childish act...if you have monsters physiology obviously you will affect by it
Rqmk:He eventually starts to act like a monster, do you expect someone normal who just transmigrate into a fantasy world just start killing everyone, that would not make much sense. He will eventually start to act like a tru goblin give it some time.
Rqmk:He eventually starts to act like a monster, do you expect someone normal who just transmigrate into a fantasy world just start killing everyone, that would not make much sense. He will eventually start to act like a tru goblin give it some time.
Rqmk:He eventually starts to act like a monster, do you expect someone normal who just transmigrate into a fantasy world just start killing everyone, that would not make much sense. He will eventually start to act like a tru goblin give it some time.
True your body can impact your character, that always made me disdain some reviewers, like when an old person suddenly gains a teenage body, sure he has experience, but he is also affected by a teenagers raging hormones. Many people tend to overlook this and only consider the characters soul and mental state.
AlayaShiki:yeah i guess? like old people reincarnated into baby he will affect by baby physiology make childish act...if you have monsters physiology obviously you will affect by itimage