it has potential and concept of the mc is nice.
having two MCs is also refreshing
unfortunately the end of the first volume is a bit of forced plot and was executed poorly
Hello, thanks for the review.
I'm glad you like the MCs, but saddened by your disappointment with the conclusion of the first book.
I'll do my best to make the second book an even more enjoyable experience for you and hope its ending will be satisfactory enough.
I'll revise the earlier chapters now that I have more experience and confidence. I hope you'll like the result once I'm done.
Ps: The story won't fundamentally change, but the scenes will be better described, and the writing much easier to follow