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It started off good but quickly got too convoluted with the story. The MC doesn't even really have a goal as to why he's doing the stuff that he's doing. Getting stronger to 'protect his family' is a weak excuse authors use to give a goal to an MC but it doesn't have any substance. He also applies for university but never goes there and yes he probably won't learn anything there at this point, why make it a system quest and waste our time with that whole plot line in the first place?

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Getting A System In A Modern World

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Liked it!

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Thanks for your review. I appreciate it very much.