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Mario_Alonso9dCommentedCh 9 Cap 9- Mario_Alonso1mthCommented
komi shouko
Insert [Anime, Manga, Manhwa.. waifus you want to see in this fiction] - Mario_Alonso1mthCommented
I prefer this. You could make a 2nd fanfic where you follow the pokemon grunt route. Loving the story by the way.
Option 1 - Let The Story Proceed How It Should According To The Original Games. - Mario_Alonso2mthCommented
Yes! This is fantastic, I hope you can do this author.
I would like to give a early warning to everyone, that I will be introducing oc both friend and antagonists early in the story with even oc plots as many things were left out by Kishimoto. And I've always wanted to play with the Naruto story in my own way, rather than using generic fanfiction plot. So If this isn't your preferred style, consider yourself warned. - Mario_Alonso2mthCommented
but... couldnt you live for a month with 1 pokedollar?? does this mean that an egg is worth 15000 months of food...
Undeterred, I engaged in a vigorous round of haggling, driving the price down to a more reasonable 15,000 Pokédollars. - Mario_Alonso2mthCommentedCh 371 Innovative
- Mario_Alonso2mthCommentedSo, tell me. What powers can be given to Riser Phenex?
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It is a bit below average...WQ is somewhat choppy. The author doesnt speak English all that well and there are too many chinese expressions that ruin the flow and mood. There are even statements that contradict each other. Still, it is readable.SD is okay. Some dude is transmigrated to the year 1975. Though we are told the protagonist is someone that came to NY looking for opportunities he feels like a standard chinese story MC. Anyways, still okay.CD. Very unlikeable. As I mentioned before, MC Feels like a generic chinese protagonist. Other characters behave irrationally or outright weird several times. US. Very good. Author seems motivated and is pumping those chapters out.WB. It is okay. Author did in fact research abojt the things that he talks about but ghe way people are makes the world background feel weird, destroying the inmersion. Overall a 2,8. As an advice, I would try to avoid chinese cliches and behaviors when writing in a western setting. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] Anyways, have a nice day author.
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Police I swear to God, not simping for a Child. (Couldnt find a gif with the song lyrics, so I chose the next best gif.)
'But FBI, I swear to God I only see her as my little sister when she was a kid!!'. - Mario_Alonso3mthCommented
nope
No. - Mario_Alonso4mthCommented
An apartment costs as little as a pokemon with unknown potential.
The cheapest one had a rent of 700 Poke, while the most expensive one cost 2000 Poke. The buying price, at least the ones that could be bought, was ranging from 280.000 to 650.000 Poke. - Mario_Alonso4mthCommented1. Halo X Warhammer
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i would love to see a character who is older than original MC.
While we are still approaching the end of this story, write to me in the comments. What elements would you like to be present in the new story? Which aspects of this story do you think should be improved for the next one, and which should be minimized? - Mario_Alonso4mthCommented
NUT
And if anyone could orchestrate such an act, then it had to be a Supreme Being or someone powerful enough, and in his case it surely had to be Him. - Mario_Alonso4mthCommented
I hope it says like this
This book has been deleted. - Mario_Alonso5mthCommented
Dont worry, in fact it would be quite weird if you released a new console so soon. After all, what would happen to those who still owned the 8 bit console? Its been just a year or two since they bought it yet they have to buy a new one to be able to play new games? This is why consoles had a 5 year life expectancy. Loving your story by the way. Have some powerstones handsome author.
[I apologize if some readers have expressed concerns about the pace of my writing and the delay in releasing the 16-bit and Gameboy. However, given that I am currently publishing three chapters per day, I believed it would be more manageable. In Chapter 151, the main character will finally unveil the 16-bit and Gameboy, along with the video games they have been preparing for a long time during the ongoing research on the 16-bit and Gameboy. I'm sorry if it seemed like I was dragging the story; perhaps it's because I was moving too quickly and publishing three chapters daily, which may have affected the pace of my writing.] - Mario_Alonso5mthCommentedCh 68 World Of Pirates: Part 06
- Mario_Alonso5mthReplied to MrGrimTheReaperI saw Peter as he walked to me "Thank you for yesterday Law."
- Mario_Alonso5mthReplied to arystanbek_niyazovCh 67 World Of Pirates: Part 05