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This is actually very interesting. Is this your first novel? You writing is really good and the story is pretty interesting althought, it was just like any other transmigration stories. But overall, it's really good. I made my own novel, and i want to ask for advice on how I can make it better.
RE: starting my life in the another world is the only way?
WhereIsHumanity
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i'm not sure i can help you but, i will try... Moreover, you are right that this is my first novel. In fact, I've only been learning to write since November last year. I believe that narrative is the most important thing in writing. I'm not saying dialogue and monologue are not important. but my priority is narrative. I don't know what the method name is. but I always exaggerate the narrative I write. makes it look unique and not monotonous. I also always try to express my imagination and make the situations I write about described in a situation that is easier to understand. but using a very difficult narrative is also very bad. because some readers will definitely be confused and their imagination will be destroyed before understanding the written narrative. Therefore, don't make the narrative too difficult to understand. but also don't make the narrative too easy and monotonous. hope this Will help you... i think... example : David runs alone in the morning. The sunlight is still dim, indicating that he is running at a time when the sun is not yet fully visible. He continues running alone like a lonely person trying out a new routine in his life. The festering loneliness in his heart compels him to do something, even though David doesn't know the meaning behind his current actions. He keeps running without direction or purpose. Running and running aimlessly, he tries to forget the loneliness that is rotting in his heart by doing something he doesn't usually do. The sound of irregular breathing coming out of his mouth indicates that he is not accustomed to this activity. But David chooses to keep running, even if it is meaningless, until he can't run anymore. (and for dialogue and monologue. For me, it's enough to use my own imagination. However, make sure the dialogue and monologue flow naturally. make it as natural as possible. don't let yourself think that it looks stiff and the most important thing of all is the storyline which continues to develop.) Don't completely believe all that. after all... i'm just newbie
Thank you for taking your time, answering my question and giving me advice. English isn't really my first language, so my grammar seems to be off sometimes. And I also didn't try learning how to write , I just wanted to write and I did. By the way, your writings are really good despite you being a newbie, keep it up bro!
WhereIsHumanity:i'm not sure i can help you but, i will try... Moreover, you are right that this is my first novel. In fact, I've only been learning to write since November last year. I believe that narrative is the most important thing in writing. I'm not saying dialogue and monologue are not important. but my priority is narrative. I don't know what the method name is. but I always exaggerate the narrative I write. makes it look unique and not monotonous. I also always try to express my imagination and make the situations I write about described in a situation that is easier to understand. but using a very difficult narrative is also very bad. because some readers will definitely be confused and their imagination will be destroyed before understanding the written narrative. Therefore, don't make the narrative too difficult to understand. but also don't make the narrative too easy and monotonous. hope this Will help you... i think... example : David runs alone in the morning. The sunlight is still dim, indicating that he is running at a time when the sun is not yet fully visible. He continues running alone like a lonely person trying out a new routine in his life. The festering loneliness in his heart compels him to do something, even though David doesn't know the meaning behind his current actions. He keeps running without direction or purpose. Running and running aimlessly, he tries to forget the loneliness that is rotting in his heart by doing something he doesn't usually do. The sound of irregular breathing coming out of his mouth indicates that he is not accustomed to this activity. But David chooses to keep running, even if it is meaningless, until he can't run anymore. (and for dialogue and monologue. For me, it's enough to use my own imagination. However, make sure the dialogue and monologue flow naturally. make it as natural as possible. don't let yourself think that it looks stiff and the most important thing of all is the storyline which continues to develop.) Don't completely believe all that. after all... i'm just newbie