I'm a new writer, I know that as you begin to read it, it kind of feels boring and maybe my writing isn't really that good. But i promise to improve this story as I upload more chapters. If ever you guys see wrong grammars or anything that feels off with my writing, feel free to correct me or tell me so i can change it.

Thank you for taking your time, answering my question and giving me advice. English isn't really my first language, so my grammar seems to be off sometimes. And I also didn't try learning how to write , I just wanted to write and I did. By the way, your writings are really good despite you being a newbie, keep it up bro!

This is actually very interesting. Is this your first novel? You writing is really good and the story is pretty interesting althought, it was just like any other transmigration stories. But overall, it's really good. I made my own novel, and i want to ask for advice on how I can make it better.

Thank you🙏

"Are you alright?" could be something like that

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