The biggest problem is that it reads like a translation, or perhaps the authors first language isn't english. There are loads of inconsistencies with the characters- speech being the biggest. Gojo speaks OOC, the MC overcomplicating sentences etc. It's a glaring issue, but one you can sort of ignore if you try hard enough.
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LIKEnah the author's mother language is Portuguese and we give pronouns to everything like one would name a ship a feminine item by its name. so like what should be "the energy" is "she energy" because in Portuguese it's "a Energia" and it's a feminine pronoun and name.
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Minuano:nah the author's mother language is Portuguese and we give pronouns to everything like one would name a ship a feminine item by its name. so like what should be "the energy" is "she energy" because in Portuguese it's "a Energia" and it's a feminine pronoun and name.