A unique story. An oc Nara that's basically a genuis/prodigy with monstrous never-before-seen talent and bloodline. Characters are fleshed out fairly well, plot is coherent and worldbuilding seems to be great. Powerful levels are semi-defined, which i love. Overall, a great story. My critique for now is how the reactions and behaviours of some characters don't necessarily match my expectations of the actual characters in the actual anime. But i guess that's why this is a fanfiction.
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LIKEMost likely the author has thought that due to the mc being present, the mc created a butterfly effect which changed some characters behaviors a bit, an example would be naruto as the mc made sure to interact with him whenever he had the chance meaning narutos personality should of changed as naruto in the original story never had anyone until the academy