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One of the best adaptations of Harry Potter and a refreshing take compared to many other fan fics. 9.9/10 only issue I had is it ended way too soon. This is one of the rare fan fics where you want it to last longer due to how good it is. It is also very different from the original HP as hermoine and ron are never friends with harry, hell hermoine dies due to the troll attack
The best harry Potter book i have ever read, love how much it talks about the culture of the wizarding world because it gives it so much depth, glad the author showed how hermoine, dummbledore and the weasleys would be if it was real, love how fast snape gets arrested, glad the love interest was daphne and not hermoine or ginny as both dont help the story, wish the author didnt drop this as there is no way its completed due to the way it was left
Most likely the author has thought that due to the mc being present, the mc created a butterfly effect which changed some characters behaviors a bit, an example would be naruto as the mc made sure to interact with him whenever he had the chance meaning narutos personality should of changed as naruto in the original story never had anyone until the academy
One of, if not the best naruto fan fic i have ever read as the author doesnt make the character op for no reason. The author also also adds details into the story that most wouldnt even think of like adding some more senju clan members and shows more in depth info about each clan, an example would be how the senju has vassal clans. I would highly suggest everyone to give this a read as the book is really good and has long chapters
It seems like a translation as sometimes the names changes around while some names of characters and places were just straight up changed to something else, an example is Yinsen who helped iron man out of the cave, in this book his name changed to ethan, other than translation problems it seems like a good book and would suggest author fixes some of these problems in the chapters as most people would drop this book due to these simple problems as i think if these simple problems were fixed the book would be amazing
Seems like a child wrote this with how bad the quality is and the whole time he was in the lightning village was skipped as if they don't care about the story as who skips the first 13 year of a main characters life when writing about Naruto world. i would suggest that you don't waste your time reading this unless the author rewrites it in a way that makes it more readable as you can't tell who is talking in the book right now, the abilities/talents of the mc seems good but sadly the author didn't write the story that good
Seems like a child wrote this with how bad the quality is and half the stuff seems forced as if they don't care about how the story progresses. i would suggest that you don't waste your time reading this unless the author rewrites it in a way that makes it more readable as you can't tell who is talking in the book right now, the powers of the mc seems good but sadly the author didn't write the story that good
Love this book and how the book is focusing on the mc and not really speaking about harry other than the beginning of the book where mc becomes his friend also love how the author built up the story and the whole world in the book as it adds a ton to it, if someone is looking to read HP book i would highly suggest this. I really hope the author keeps going with this book as its really good and the author seems way to good at writing books in my opinion
how can people read this i mean it starts off half way through the story giving you info about him without showing you how he gets there at all, it also doesn't even give any background about him or his friends/family, if you want to read a story that builds the character from the start dont read this as it just throws you into it halfway through
this is one of the best books I have read and I have read over 100 on this site also I would love it if you put out another chapter but only if you can and make sure you don't push yourself thinking People will stop reading as there are a lot of people that will stay even if you don't post for six months+