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Shameless Author review! Anyway, this is my first time writing a fan-fiction and i hope you all enjoy it. I plan to have fantasy, sci-fi and other elements scattered throughout the story and plan to have romance in there as well (It will be a Yuri). Please feel free to leave comments, i love them, have a good day/night.
Reality Bender System, Marvel
Alex_Simmonds
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Alex_Simmonds:Chapter 11: I stepped over towards the mirror that was placed against the wall, it must have served as a tool to teach magic as every now and then it shimmered in opalescent light. I stepped to the front of the mirror the first thing to come into focus was the heart-shaped face with lilac hair that fell either side of my face, I turned my body to find that the hair reached midway down my back. As I stepped back to try and fully examine my body I saw my 'stats' I had relatively large breasts that seemed to stay perfectly upright despite gravities' best attempts. My body was rather lithe and seemed athletic.
Yes it's an interesting trend... I personally like yuri stories as they are just fresh for me, especially seeing as how a lot of other stories are just a man being a playboy and so on, gaining a massive harem. Anyway, thanks for the comment, hope you enjoy my fan fic!
clemdarkangel555:I’m starting to wonder why the 2/3 of the stories with female main persona are yuris. Not that I hate it, the contrary, but since it does not correspond at all to reality, it surprises me. In any case, the idea looks interesting, I hope I will like and thank you in adavance for your work.
Alex_Simmonds:Yes it's an interesting trend... I personally like yuri stories as they are just fresh for me, especially seeing as how a lot of other stories are just a man being a playboy and so on, gaining a massive harem. Anyway, thanks for the comment, hope you enjoy my fan fic!
Why is the story very similar to the fallen hemer. Author, I hope you won’t copy too much, if you don’t have enough of your own ideas, be inspired by as many fan fictions and novels as possible. Then if you build everything correctly, for example, if you get inspired, you will come up with a story that will even be unique.
I have already said that i was originally inspired by Fallen Gamer, my story has been evolving over time, so don't worry, it does change in later chapters.
Artem_5195:Why is the story very similar to the fallen hemer. Author, I hope you won’t copy too much, if you don’t have enough of your own ideas, be inspired by as many fan fictions and novels as possible. Then if you build everything correctly, for example, if you get inspired, you will come up with a story that will even be unique.
Found yours more engaging. But… is there really polygamy in the relationships, it’s making me esitate reading more.
Alex_Simmonds:I have already said that i was originally inspired by Fallen Gamer, my story has been evolving over time, so don't worry, it does change in later chapters.
There is multiple partners... Don't worry they all get character development and such, i won't ignore them, even if i have to make independent chapters of them experiencing something!
ScarletQC:Found yours more engaging. But… is there really polygamy in the relationships, it’s making me esitate reading more.
I mean, they’re only going to be romantically and shrexually involved with the MC and not between each other. Yes or no.
Alex_Simmonds:There is multiple partners... Don't worry they all get character development and such, i won't ignore them, even if i have to make independent chapters of them experiencing something!
ScarletQC:I mean, they’re only going to be romantically and shrexually involved with the MC and not between each other. Yes or no.
can you pls describe her looks I don't know if I missed it but am at ch11 and don't still know what she looks like pls
Alex_Simmonds:Mainly just them and MC... May be a few encounters with multiple but we'll see.
Chapter 11: I stepped over towards the mirror that was placed against the wall, it must have served as a tool to teach magic as every now and then it shimmered in opalescent light. I stepped to the front of the mirror the first thing to come into focus was the heart-shaped face with lilac hair that fell either side of my face, I turned my body to find that the hair reached midway down my back. As I stepped back to try and fully examine my body I saw my 'stats' I had relatively large breasts that seemed to stay perfectly upright despite gravities' best attempts. My body was rather lithe and seemed athletic.
Nova_Lagacy:can you pls describe her looks I don't know if I missed it but am at ch11 and don't still know what she looks like pls
Alex_Simmonds:Chapter 11: I stepped over towards the mirror that was placed against the wall, it must have served as a tool to teach magic as every now and then it shimmered in opalescent light. I stepped to the front of the mirror the first thing to come into focus was the heart-shaped face with lilac hair that fell either side of my face, I turned my body to find that the hair reached midway down my back. As I stepped back to try and fully examine my body I saw my 'stats' I had relatively large breasts that seemed to stay perfectly upright despite gravities' best attempts. My body was rather lithe and seemed athletic.
There's not a lot of yuri stories compared to other genres, in my opinion, and even though there a good chunk of them, many either don't get updated frequently or just get dropped. So bless you, kind author, for giving us yuri
Alex_Simmonds:Yes it's an interesting trend... I personally like yuri stories as they are just fresh for me, especially seeing as how a lot of other stories are just a man being a playboy and so on, gaining a massive harem. Anyway, thanks for the comment, hope you enjoy my fan fic!
Heh, in a way, it's better than Fallen Gamer since you update so often, hahaha. Although I still read FG, yours is superior atm
Alex_Simmonds:I have already said that i was originally inspired by Fallen Gamer, my story has been evolving over time, so don't worry, it does change in later chapters.
