It is made out in a language which is focused more on eloquence and sophistry than practical use and ease of reading. This makes it a chore to read it hence breaking my immersion. I genuinely tried to read for the good premise it promised but the complex language used helped put me to sleep in no time twice. This takes away from the reading experience and immersion making it not compelling enough to persue the end of the story and sadly I will be dropping it as I am here for my enjoyment not to be educated on my new words and ways to form sentences to depict the same scene in a much more complex and beautiful way.
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