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Vishrut_Jaiswal

Vishrut_Jaiswal

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2021-09-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal1mth
    Replied to BhArAtH_KuMaR

    is there any romance at all? i have read till 33 and i think till there it had none, don't remember as it had been a while back

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    The Tycoon Inheritance
    Fantasy ¡ Devoted_laurel
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal1mth
    Posted

    Amazing story from male point of view. A rare romance and business management novel which does not have harem or annoying charecters who feel forced. Realistic and refreshing. 9/10 would reccomend

    altalt
    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
    Urban ¡ Peace every year
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal2mth
    Replied to Aurora_Drakon

    author should atleast answer questions

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    Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy ¡ Aurora_Drakon
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal2mth
    Posted

    It is made out in a language which is focused more on eloquence and sophistry than practical use and ease of reading. This makes it a chore to read it hence breaking my immersion. I genuinely tried to read for the good premise it promised but the complex language used helped put me to sleep in no time twice. This takes away from the reading experience and immersion making it not compelling enough to persue the end of the story and sadly I will be dropping it as I am here for my enjoyment not to be educated on my new words and ways to form sentences to depict the same scene in a much more complex and beautiful way.

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    My Apocalyptic Rabbit Wife
    Fantasy ¡ YokoyokoRPG
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal3mth
    Replied to Vishrut_Jaiswal

    no worries. I see the potential and hope my review helps.

    altalt
    Carnal Cultivation
    Fantasy ¡ ASKeeling
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal3mth
    Posted

    can be much better. i feel that later on you focused more on the side charecters that the mc and fmc. too many charecters to keep upbwith at the early stages can also ruin it if you focus on them all. first decelop the main charecters a bit and then focus on others a bit not the other way around.

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    Carnal Cultivation
    Fantasy ¡ ASKeeling
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal3mth
    Commented
    Ch 176 Chapter 176: Even A Gentleman Like Me Needs To Be Guarded Against?_1
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    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
    Urban ¡ Peace every year
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal3mth
    Commented

    please write bigger chapters that don't end at a single event ,that too incomplete 😢

    Ch 172 Chapter 172: An Nuonuo's Social Death Moment
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    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
    Urban ¡ Peace every year
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal3mth
    Commented
    Ch 170 Chapter 170 An Nuonuo: Isn't this repaying kindness with enmity?
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    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
    Urban ¡ Peace every year
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal3mth
    Posted

    awesome.[img=Feeling it] some of the best romance novel. really love the main leads. wholesome [img=More pls][img=Loving it] there is charecter development for fmc too.[img=Smug]

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    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
    Urban ¡ Peace every year
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  • Vishrut_Jaiswal
    Vishrut_Jaiswal3mth
    Posted

    it is good. charecter development of mc and fmc. wholesome family moments and romance.

    altalt
    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy ¡ SleepDeprivedSloth
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