Review Detail of Justin_Spartan in Unique Gamers Travels

The big issues: 1. the author/MC picked a world that they (in the story and by writing out of the story as well) find apparently boring. Seriously, if you don't like a setting enough to want to explore its intricacies then why are you picking it to begin with? Great fan fiction explores a setting and tries to expand on the pre-existing canon in small and unique ways. 2. She has yet to do simple shit like throw an Undetectable Expansion Charm on her room or really do anything "magical" except some combat magic she throws out to flex. And flex she does, like she's a genius and not someone who was given everything by her system. (Which is typical of people who get a system in fiction, but it doesn't make it less eyeroll worthy.) 3. Zero dramatic tension. 4. Honestly, it feels like the author/MC only went to Legacies so that they could shit on characters they don't like and hook up with their waifu of choice.