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Gishi_4187
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the author is good at writing but the story and character design kinda seem to be lacking... like a flat can of soda due to a few things like the MC being a background character with no idea about the world he's in making him seem like a drooling moron with no personality. the author tries to make the MC seem like an interesting character by giving him a devouring skill but that falls flat as well because the MC can't truly take advantage of his skill due to his lack of memories.... linda like giving a monkey a sward expecting him to be able to use it properly lol. the only saving grace is the merging souls give him memories of how to use his new skills. As for adding fate characters, I don't mind them so much it just seems like they don't blend well with the type of world and kinda seem to replace the main cast as a consolation prize so Bell can keep his herem.

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Danmachi: the Great Devourer

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Xanok_Malakai
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thank you for the honest review. I agree that some things are awkward and mc isn't using his ability to the fullest would that is because his body couldn't handle those higher level abilities. it's closer to the newest chapter rn (40) that he will start to expand his skill set as he enters lvl 4. you are welcome to bounce ideas off me on what his gluttony or other abilities can do and we shall see if I can add in more than what I already had planned. thanks again for thr honest review. I know I'm still pretty amateurish

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That and the fact he gets a bs nerf