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Srsly? . I dropped this cause MC seems to be too merciful... He should have killed the phobio guy to gayn some EXP but instead He let him goo? TF?. I wasted my time reading this whole 5 chapters full of filler fights and all of that for what?? .. It's like a whole fight that should have been ended in 1 chapter being drag in 5 chapters.. Like srsly there's too many good scenes but the execution seems too tiring to read.. Every chapters seems to be fillers. The only good part of the story is when MC bully the dragon..Too much info dump... Tooooo slow phased! You have to read a whole 10 chapters or more to end a fight. Author seems intentionally stretching the story instead finishing it in 1 to 2 chapters..
An Extra’s POV
Magecrafter
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Anyway, Too much stretching to the point where You can speed run reading 10 chapter in 5 minutes.. The Only most relevant to read (I think) are the Inner monologues of every character(or may I add Status and Actions), and nothing more. The next scenarios are too predictable to the point we're you already what would happen. This story is too good and has more potential than the other stories that I've read so far but, well, a little disappointing I guess(for my part). And I just realized, or it's just my opinion, but it's like only the MC's character is not solid enough to understand what's going on in his mind. Tooo chaotic..
I believe I mentioned it in my authors note that it's my preferred style of writing. I'm not stretching anything out. It's just how I prefer to tell my story. If you don't like it, then that's fine. I already mentioned in my review that this story isn't for everyone. As for the MC being merciful; just because you don't like it doesn't make it bad. He let the guy go for a reason, and he's not going to become a cold-blooded killer overnight like you want him to be. I hope you find the kind of book you're looking for, because this clearly isn't it.
Magecrafter:I believe I mentioned it in my authors note that it's my preferred style of writing. I'm not stretching anything out. It's just how I prefer to tell my story. If you don't like it, then that's fine. I already mentioned in my review that this story isn't for everyone. As for the MC being merciful; just because you don't like it doesn't make it bad. He let the guy go for a reason, and he's not going to become a cold-blooded killer overnight like you want him to be. I hope you find the kind of book you're looking for, because this clearly isn't it.