Review Detail of HegemonDao in Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both

Bro, she didn't do anything. All of those were lies.How many times do I have to tell? I have no problem with low stars but if you want to give at least wait for scenes. I mean the real thing and then give it.You see how many out there are giving ratings without even reading.Read the scene which is will before 255 or 260 and then give the review of 1 star or more.

That's why I didn't give 1 star. but 3 stars. The story was good. I read it happily. But I feel irritated on how you wrote until, chapter 202 (I am there currently). I mean I didn't stop reading. I am reading, and if I am satisfied with the future story, i will edit this and give the maximum I can. I am still reading and will keep reading... But what annoyed me is how you delivered Irina's part. Not any otherthing, They maybe Lies. But Irina felt it as real, so did Leon. So even if they are lies, even if leon knows they maybe lies, even if Irina knows that she was manipulated, the way you delivered is what you made me frustrated. Like, You could have not used other Leon to control Leon's actions. It just felt forced. Ah! whatever, I will just see what happens.

That where were you were wrong. The other Leon wasn't a cultivator so how did he do it? Why don't you think that? He said Irina was innocent but he nor I never said he did it. Memory manipulation isn't a simple skill that anyone who could do it

Sigh! To your story, To what you wanted, you did well. I mean you wanted to hit at something and you did. And we also thought why did that happen? BUT, You could have done for some other scenario, I just feel...*Sigh* Let's not talk about it. Since I know no one is at wrong here, I will keep reading with my mouth shut (As I always did...) But even if all changes, I will never get myself to like Irina as a character, maybe I won't hate her, maybe I'll become neutral. That's what happen with Xia Qingyue of Against the Gods. She did everything for Yun che, but the way she did or to be precise, the way author delivered it made me drop the novel. But here it was not to that extreme, since you showed things related to Leon and irina in flashbacks. So it's fine.... Well anyway, calm down mate, And write well while also balancing your studies, You can do that. i think this is your first book. right? Write your second, third and so on... You will be a great author, because your first attempt is already better than others. At least better than mine.