The story flows well and keeps you reading late into the night well past when you should have gone to bed. The grammar is pretty good but you can see small mistakes here or there and the mistakes don't impact the story much at all.The selfish part of me wishes the update speed was faster but again, that is my own selfish wish. The author still updates regularly at least. I will admit I am worried about how drastically the MC's personality has changed since the book started. He seems to be developing a lot of mental illnesses based on how erratic his actions and thoughts have become.
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