sorry, author, but this story is too raw.. couldn't go through the first 10 chapters.. the author concentrates too much on the MC and his egoism and arrogance.. every 3 paragraphs mentioning the MC's age and how he built this and that.. there's no explanation to doing things, just doing for the heck of it or because the MC is a genius. I would recommend building the world better and creating meaning for MC's actions, giving depth to the scenarios and events..
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