Review Detail of Gishi_4187 in my new life in highschool dxd
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Well, it would be better if the author would stop putting in filler with his childhood...... I mean, two entire chapters saying that he spends time with his loving parents are just too much when it could be explained in less than three sentences. I feel at this pace. It's going to be over 100 chapters before canon. I'm not sure about the MC because, in the beginning, he wished for a paper that grants wishes... the only thing he wished for so far was a dumb and useless cultivation system... If you won the lottery, would you settle with trading it for a meal at McDonald's? Why not have a better system that includes cultivation, like a universal energy system or multiversal gamer system? Because of this, you have him stress about his weakness and fear. Not being able to protect his loved ones. Could you not wish for protection for your loved ones with the wish paper?
my new life in highschool dxd
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I just feel like the writer's attempt to make the MC seem less OP just makes him seem dumb and nieve... I mean who goes to DXD where tri-hexa and alien gods threaten to destroy the world and only use a system with slow growth that doesn't really have any heavy-hitting abilities? what I mean about slow growth is the time it would take to be a conceptual being that may stand a chance against an alien god. in 90% of cultivation novels, it takes cultivators thousands of years to reach a stage where you could have a chance in a fight against an alien god.
Felonn:Many novice writers attempt to use the 'protection of loved ones' as a driving force to enhance the Mc's character or acquire new abilities, but often fall short. It begs the question, what is lost when creating a Mc who wishes for something op? After all, let's be honest, crafting a fictional character in a fan fiction work hardly warrants originality.
Many novice writers attempt to use the 'protection of loved ones' as a driving force to enhance the Mc's character or acquire new abilities, but often fall short. It begs the question, what is lost when creating a Mc who wishes for something op? After all, let's be honest, crafting a fictional character in a fan fiction work hardly warrants originality.
